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When No One Will Listen by ~Greenwolf103:iconGreenwolf103:

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When no one will listen,
No one will care.
Nothing is left.
No feelings are there.

Just walk on by.
Forget all that was done.
No one will hear you.
No, not a one.

You have been judged.
You have been labeled.
The trial is over.
Your fight for yourself failed.

Doesn't matter if they're wrong.
What's done has been done.
No one will hear you.
No, not a one.


COPYRIGHT 2006 BY DAWN COLCLASURE
©2006-2010 ~Greenwolf103
:icongreenwolf103:

Author's Comments

I have struggled with the right words to use to convey the reasoning behind this poem. My attempts were often too poetic or literary -- a fault I often cannot muzzle.

I will say only this: Judgment of a person should not be made without the chance to know that person better.

These are not my beliefs. They are not some conclusion which I have reached. Only a feeling. Only a fear.

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~GingerbreadxCoffin Jan 28, 2006, 4:33:07 PM
hmm, very deep concept, judgement is something we all do, everyday, but we have tourble handling the turth, and knwing that we are judged as well :nod:

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klaha thinks he's a ghost...



prints :pointl: :thumbsup:


peace in AMEHIKAAAH! :peace:
:icongreenwolf103:
~Greenwolf103 Jan 28, 2006, 9:34:27 PM
Yes, that is true. But sometimes the judgments others reach of people, and in this poem's case, people they don't REALLY know, can be wrong and misguided. Just a matter of clarifying those judgments. Well, if they WANT to. But if that doesn't happen, it's really a matter beyond our control.

--
Pick your poison:
[link] or [link]
Don't talk shit unless you're prepared to eat it.
:iconargentreivich:
~ArgentReivich Jan 28, 2006, 10:27:55 PM
Reputations are hard to gain and easy to stain, much like toilet paper
:icongreenwolf103:
~Greenwolf103 Jan 28, 2006, 11:07:33 PM
That is so true.... I have seen this in my networking, as well.

Thanks for the feedback. :)

--
Pick your poison:
[link] or [link]
Don't talk shit unless you're prepared to eat it.
:icongingerbreadxcoffin:
~GingerbreadxCoffin Jan 29, 2006, 2:55:13 AM
true

--
klaha thinks he's a ghost...



prints :pointl: :thumbsup:


peace in AMEHIKAAAH! :peace:
:iconeverythinglost13:
~everythinglost13 Jan 29, 2006, 10:55:22 AM
Wow... I love it... It's amazing. I know exactly what it's sayin, and I've ben there way too many times... I love it

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Slit my throat and end my beginning,
Destroy my soul and kill me slowly...
I would rather be tortured a million times over...
Then have her taken away...
:iconsoftcell72:
~softcell72 Jan 29, 2006, 2:03:05 PM
an all too true facat in this world we live in, we are judged by words, actions, even the words of others. and too often NOT by anything direct connection

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change is good, you go first.
Light travels faster than sound, which is why a person can appear bright, until they open their mouth.
hating me won't make you pretty.
:icongreenwolf103:
~Greenwolf103 Jan 31, 2006, 3:19:01 PM
Wow, thank you! I am glad you like it so much. :)

--
Pick your poison:
[link] or [link]
Don't talk shit unless you're prepared to eat it.
:icongreenwolf103:
~Greenwolf103 Jan 31, 2006, 3:22:32 PM
Sad, but true. :no:

--
Pick your poison:
[link] or [link]
Don't talk shit unless you're prepared to eat it.
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